alternativesolution's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Electronic Symphony Remixed]

i like most of it.

the beat wasn't anything special, which is good, since you wanna focus mainly on the awesomeness of the charged but soft electronic symphony :)
my only problem is that the bass really needs some more recognition. if it was a little bit louder, then it would sound more equal..more including.
overall, i really liked the melody. that's the main reason why this has got a 9 :D
so it's just the bass and--oh that noise that made it drown out--> personally, i think that sounded awful, ruining the sound for a second
D:
but it doesn't do anything major, so nothing to worry about.
-Vesta J

[Imbalance of Spheres]

lol!

this was really cute to listen to as it progressed.
and no, i didn't freak out. this is actually a pretty cool piece! it was really amusing :D
i felt like i was in a video game and i was a royal thief (whatever that is o.o) escaping the castle because the king was gonna whoop my ass.
haha randomosity xD
i think the main reason why i found this comical/medievalish was the constant--but seemed to be off beat with the tune-- fast beat. (nice thing there with the math, btw)
oh yeah. like i was saying. it was mostly the instruments you used. and the fast, fleeing way it presented itself. and the hihats? i didn't really like how that introduced the rest of the song. but the main thing about this song was the beat. it made the rest of the song seem pathetic, like it was boasting, "Ha! I am better than thou! Kneel before me, o slow ones!"
Okay, end of personification of digital things..

but overall, i liked it. the tune is definitely something to be recognized. that's where you excelled.
(i don't get the title, tho..? maybe it's the imagery it conjures, that's all. because i can't really think of an imbalance of spheres. btw: please tell me if i have started making sense. No-- really.) and as for the genre? i guess this sounds a little techno. a lot of people mistake trance for techno, and this could also be just miscellaneous or something else. but that's not really important.

pathock3 responds:

Lol cute? Surely not! It is epic. Like someone training for a pie eating contest or something. But the royal thief immage is also valid. And the title? Don't worry about it. I was writing the title and it just came to me and I was like, yes. Perfect. So if you don't get it, don't worry. You're on the same page that I am. On a more serious note, a better transition between sections would certainly be a good move. As for the genre, I didn't really know where to put it, and to be honest, I don't really know what trance is... anyways, thanks for reviewing.

[Luminosity-ID]

a little repetitive, but in a good way.

but still sounds really beautiful!
the strings seemed a little late coming in at each measure (i think its just the tone tho)
the beat suits it well in terms of not being off, but i really like when it hits 1:41.
it can be used as a powerful background theme to a flash the evokes sympathy or to a character who's going over their last actions/reviewing what they've done.
pardon me if i don't make sense.
the part i really think was displaced was at :51 where the beat seemed a little bad ass
>:D
it just seemed really out of place, and much shallower to everything else. then again, it all depends on how you look at it, i guess.
i hit 3 but i meant to make it 4/5
:(
i hate when i do that..that's the 2nd time today!
i feel like this really doesn't belong anywhere near a 2.83.. STUPID BOMBERS...
..so when i clicked 3 it only went to 2.87 -.-
this is a great piece, tho! i'm glad i came upon this :)
-vesta :"D

itsameyayo responds:

Thanks :)

-Very descriptive review as well. Yeah, just an older piece, but I thought it was worth a shot here.

-Thank you again, I'm glad you even came across this :)

-ImperfectDisciple

[Karzelt9]

sounds cool :D

sounds pretty cool, overall
the voices sounded a little random tho...
even tho i've like the queen of random XD
very nice industrial piece. the beat is kick ass :D
can't find much else to say--> sorry if this is a crappy review :|
-vesta

[I'm NOT gay]

LMFAO!!

this is so awesomely ungay!!
:D:D
hahaha love the tune, i understand what u say about being gay.
ok, nota really, but i had to add to the cornyness of this review xD
kudos on the lyrics!!
and the instrumental :D
they gotta play this on the radio, man.. im laugh my ass off :D
a little short..but that's okay because there's fast lyrics here
haha i think i laughed through this whole song :D:D
nice job! the kindergarten teacher thing..lmfao..
i think you should post the lyrics on the author's comments!!
-vesta :"D

[_-={Machine of Judgement}=-_]

lmfao! kudos! :D

lol, same here. i'd really love to see someone despise this.

VERY EPIC, indeed.
. . .
I LOVE THE STORY THAT GOES WITH THIS.
awesomeness! XD
i've listened to a couple of your songs, but this title caught my eye.
Machine Of Judgement.
.......
dun dunn DUNNN!!!! xD
poor flash file!! it's life..
it was so short...

*minute of silence*

mwahahahaha!!
>:D

this will forever stay in my head. ..the story, i mean.
the song won't have to stay in my head, as i wouldn't care for it to, seeing as how i am going to download this and listen to it whenever i feel epicness coming on :D

YEAHH!! xD
-vesta ":D

MaestroRage responds:

Well it wouldn't be TOO hard to find somebody who didn't like it. It's all a matter of taste after all ;D!

Glad you liked the story, I tried to make P-Bot look a bit more evil then it might be, still it made for good imagery so I made him as evil as they come.

Machine of Judgment does indeed sound epic. Probably misleading to listeners who arn't aware of Newgrounds and who P-Bot is, but then again this song was more FOR the audience at Newgrounds so yeah ;D!

I hope the epicness entertains you for many hours yet :D! Thanks for the review, i'm glad you liked it!

[freestyle demo]

ehh

the kick is too loud.
the tune isn't bad.
the voice is a little too far away. i feel like a frustrated fan at the back of a concert hall. which is bad.
that's all technically speaking.
non-tech, all i can say is that i'm not one for reviewing rap lyrics, half because i can't hear them that well, plus i don't write much rap.
i see that this is a demo so i'm not going to judge you on that, but there is a place for submitting demos on here, i think..

farno1: in my opinion, about 87% of modern rap is total crap, anyway. i don't think this actually deserves a 4 whether i like it or not.
-Vesta J

classicblue responds:

lol this was just for fun. More of a comedy piece then an actual production.

[sinking ships]

very nice!

the intro was nice, but a bit long. my favorite part was when the voice was getting ready to finish and the beat starting kicking in. the music under the voice also suited it very well.
i think the whole piece was done very well. [the ending scared me a little bit..?]
you maintained the same smoothness throughout the song, even at the end. it made it seem like rough seas
5/5
-vesta :"D

spamwangler responds:

thanks:)

[Summer sleepy]

aww

this sounds very gentle and soft, adding a nice, warm feel to everything :)
and when i say everything, i mean my house T.T
haha :D
i really like this. (the title suits it, too) the tunes stay in the same key generally, and this is just amazing!
and you know what i think? i think that if this was download 10 TIMES, people should give a reason why they did. like, maybe leaving a review of how great this is..? :D
really nice work, am going to download this myself.
-vesta ":D
5/5

allemansing responds:

thankyou ^_^
"the tunes stay in the same key generally"
Yeah thats kind of what i aim for :P At 0:30 it does have a couple of not too beautiful notes in there. But its pretty much improvised so, it happens ^_^
thanks for reviewing :)

[Interlude (Full Length Song)]

well..

i'm gonna have to say that this is very well done for midi [it sounds like it--> don't blame me if i'm wrong! :O.
a major thing is-->the instruments need to sound a little more serious, i think, based on the melody. you've got an excellent melody going on, and i like how it goes throughout the song. the tune is great and and beat matches it perfectly.

what i think needs work is maybe the rhythm..just a little more variation wouldn't hurt, but it's not bad at all.
also, i don't the piano is doing to well holding a part of the melody and trying to play a bassline at the same time. i can hear some deep keys in the background, and that's okay, but a bass guitar in the background would make it sound fuller and more professional.
i mean, this sounds a lot more professional than some midis i've made. of course, i haven't put those up here cuz they need work. [i'm really lazy :D]
so yeah, it's really just minor stuff, nothing to worry about
-vesta :"D